tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5255998462657852876.post5572245589283965663..comments2023-07-03T07:31:40.117-07:00Comments on Yogi Mama Writes: Writing Through the HeatMorganMoonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01299697631266661062noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5255998462657852876.post-33648630069488211832009-07-12T02:02:59.127-07:002009-07-12T02:02:59.127-07:00Thanks Bella ;) You're a star. I had written &...Thanks Bella ;) You're a star. I had written 'hovering' by mistake, then left it in because, as you say, it kind of makes sense. I too obsess about cleaning and not because it's truly important to ME, but because I'm supposed to be a Stay at Home mom, yet my house seldom looks as if I clean it (even if I have). As always, you are so eloquent!MorganMoonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299697631266661062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5255998462657852876.post-76636989676909107802009-07-11T10:02:17.320-07:002009-07-11T10:02:17.320-07:00Hello, this is Bella.
I love the way you wrote hov...Hello, this is Bella.<br />I love the way you wrote hovering instead of hoovering. If it wasn't intentional it was an inspired mistake. Even so, it perfectly sums up motherhood in word play.<br />I spend my life hovering around other people, peripheral to their childless, free lives or their child-distracted lives. Or I spend my life hovering over my children, waiting to perform tasks. I confess, I spend little time hoovering, but do obsess about cleaning and how people will judge me unfit as a woman/mother/adult because of the mess in my house.<br />Lovely, thought provoking poem xRobinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14087230652268285527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5255998462657852876.post-40324067194213526102009-07-05T13:27:15.376-07:002009-07-05T13:27:15.376-07:00Thanks to you both, it's lovely to know that a...Thanks to you both, it's lovely to know that a poem speaks to people. Maybe you could use it to spark your own versions...tell me why do YOU write?MorganMoonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299697631266661062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5255998462657852876.post-19272828542980358922009-07-05T11:04:50.693-07:002009-07-05T11:04:50.693-07:00i also have to say wow! reading this made me tearf...i also have to say wow! reading this made me tearful, it's so powerful a real statement about writing. i feel like printing it and posting it on my wall. xxLoihttp://louisehalvardsson.com/index.php?itemid=1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5255998462657852876.post-19700535019341471942009-07-03T02:24:38.993-07:002009-07-03T02:24:38.993-07:00Wow!!! Please post more poems, I loved this one (a...Wow!!! Please post more poems, I loved this one (and I'm a total Philistine when it comes to poetry)Rinhttp://www.ayeartilimthirty.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com